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THE MUSIC VIDEO WAS DOPE! BUT THE SONG... NOT SO MUCH 🙈

December 2, 2019

 

So your video was the best part of the song, I loved the concept, shots, and acting. ⠀

 

However, I was not feeling this record. You were unable to hold my attention, and a major reason for this was due to your song structure. ⠀

 

I really didn’t like the flow patterns you chose when approaching the record! You were way too wordy, and that’s why you were unable to catch a proper flow. ⠀

 

You need to level up your pen game as well, nothing of what you wrote down there wowed me.⠀

 

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All comments made in this video should be used as tools to help improve your craft. In no way do I claim to be an expert, I am a fan of music who’s only intention is to provide a platform to provide feedback and promo for new artists.

 

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