So your video was the best part of the song, I loved the concept, shots, and acting. ⠀
However, I was not feeling this record. You were unable to hold my attention, and a major reason for this was due to your song structure. ⠀
I really didn’t like the flow patterns you chose when approaching the record! You were way too wordy, and that’s why you were unable to catch a proper flow. ⠀
You need to level up your pen game as well, nothing of what you wrote down there wowed me.⠀
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